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If your mom got a Kindle for Mother's Day, how about some FREE CONTEMPORARY/HISTORICAL FANTASY ACTION ADVENTURE ebooks with sexy heroes, dangerous alchemy, romance and supernatural encounters?
Did you previously purchase or download volume 1 of the trilogy?
On Sunday, May 12, VARANGIAN: THE ASSASSINS OF TENEO MUNDUS (Volume 2) is free, click on the image below to download:
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On Monday, May 13, volume 1 VARANGIAN: THE STONE OF BABYLON is free, click on the image to download:
As always, thank you for reading!
S K Atkins
PS. The third volume VARANGIAN: THE HIDDEN EMPIRE is currently in progress. Stay tuned for updates later this year.
The Varangian Trilogy
Official updates and information about the "Varangian" Fantasy Book Trilogy.
Saturday, May 11, 2013
Wednesday, March 27, 2013
FREE KINDLE EBOOKS on March 27, 2013 only! Part 1 and Part 2 of the VARANGIAN Trilogy
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While I'm busy working on VARANGIAN: THE HIDDEN EMPIRE (Part 3 of the Varangian Trilogy), stop by Amazon today for this Easter Double Deal: Get Part 1 and Part 2 for FREE for your Kindle!
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Sunday, January 13, 2013
VARANGIAN: THE STONE OF BABYLON - First Book in the Trilogy - Free for 2 Days!
Hello everyone :)
Monday, January 14 and Tuesday, January 15, the first book in my book trilogy VARANGIAN: THE STONE OF BABYLON will be free to download on Amazon.
Read how the story began!
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Monday, January 14 and Tuesday, January 15, the first book in my book trilogy VARANGIAN: THE STONE OF BABYLON will be free to download on Amazon.
Read how the story began!
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Tuesday, January 1, 2013
Free Romantic Fantasy Novel for Teens, Young Adults: THE SECRET ORDER OF MARACANDA
Happy New Year!
Today and Tomorrow the first novel in my forthcoming Romantic Fantasy Adventure series will be FREE to download on your preferred electronic devices (Amazon provides free Kindle software).
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Here's an excerpt:
Today and Tomorrow the first novel in my forthcoming Romantic Fantasy Adventure series will be FREE to download on your preferred electronic devices (Amazon provides free Kindle software).
Download THE SECRET ORDER OF MARACANDA here:
Here's an excerpt:
Chapter 3 - The Trees of Maracanda
And finally, I saw the iridescent towers of Maracanda
rising on the horizon.
We approached the city during daytime, amidst many
merchant treks, which traveled in different directions, coming in and
out of the city.
The noise was almost unbearable, and the air was so
thick with dust and the smell of horse manure that we had trouble
breathing.
Edric put a hand over his eyes to see better, with his
other hand he kept holding the reigns of the horse.
My father stood up in the cart. He was barely able to
keep his balance. "Home," he whispered with a rough voice.
Edric wasn't hiding his feelings either.
As he beheld the countless shimmering, onion-shaped
rooftops, the white city walls and the swaying emerald crowns of the
high trees immersed in a bluish mid-day haze, he broke out in
laughter filled with relief. He even joked with Faheem, who was
sitting next to him on the cart with a big smile stretching from one
ear to the other.
Jawl and I exchanged meaningful glances.
Now we realized that Edric hadn't been as confident in
his skills of planning his first route as he had seemed to be: It was
as if a big weight was lifted off his shoulders, and he boisterously
cheered at the merchants passing us by.
I got up, flung my arms around him and kissed his cheek.
"You did well, Edric! Thank you for bringing us home safely!"
He stopped laughing, and he gazed at me. "I wish I
could stay for a while ..."
My father patted Edric's back. "Of course! You
saved my life, my daughter's life and my alchemist's life. I will
send a messenger to Constantinople to let the emperor know where you
are. I will make you an honorary citizen, and you can stay as long as
you like. I want you to advise my guards so that they adequately
protect the palace during Soraya's wedding in autumn."
Edric gently loosened my arms, and they slid away from
his chest. His eyes filled up with tears, and he pressed his lips
firmly together.
Faheem scoffed. "You need to learn how to hide your
feelings better."
Edric turned directly at him. "Certain feelings
shouldn't be hidden. And I hope my heart will never become as cold as
yours." He turned around to my father, and he bowed his head. "I
can't lie about my feelings for Soraya, your highness. I would like
to spend some time with her, but I don't want to be present at her
wedding."
I sank to my knees and sobbed quietly.
My father took my hand. "There is nothing worse
than seeing one's child in sadness and pain. I grant you both this
time together."
Jawl smiled at me, and she whispered: "You've won."
But I didn't feel like a winner: All I got was to spend
one summer with him; our last summer before we would have to take on
our duties.
My father decided to arrive at one of the palace's back
entrances, and it took us all some time to convince his guards that
he was indeed the sultan.
Our ship had been found drifting around on the Black
Sea, and messengers had prepared my mother for the worst.
Unfortunately, my husband-to-be, Prince Khaleed, had also heard of
the bad news, and he had traveled to Maracanda to dissolve the
marriage contract.
So we all stood there in the Great Hall, awkwardly
staring at each other.
My mother fell into my father's arms, and his other six
wives followed, but my future husband was almost out of the door
again.
We had never seen each other before (and we weren't
supposed to).
I was to be his fifth wife, and I had imagined that he
was already quite old. It turned out that he wasn't that much older
than Edric and just as handsome.
I noticed that Edric felt very uncomfortable, and I
rushed to his side. "This is Edric, and he saved our lives!"
Khaleed walked up to him with measuring glances. "Thank
you, stranger from the north."
I saw a muscle twitch in Edric's face: It wasn't the
first time he had been addressed this way.
Khaleed turned to my father. "I'm delighted to see
that you're well! I'm sorry that I can't stay, but I need to be back
in time to marry my fourth wife." He smiled at me. "We'll
see each other again in autumn, Princess Soraya." He indicated a
bow, but his glances wandered to Edric. "Enjoy your stay in this
magnificent city." He looked directly into Edric's eyes, as if
this was a test of courage for him. "And don't take it personal
when people are scared of your bright eyes."
Edric squinted, and I realized that this was the reason
why he often kept his eyes half-way closed. At first, I had assumed
it was part of his training to heighten his other senses.
Khaleed waved to his guards and courtiers, and he
briskly walked out of the Great Hall, trailing his sweeping and
richly embroidered overcoat.
My parents retired to their private chambers, and Faheem
vanished to his laboratory downstairs.
Edric sadly glanced at me. "You're going to be his
fifth wife ... You mean everything to me, but for him you'd be just
one among many."
Jawl laughed. "It's a tradition for sultans and
princes to have more than one wife. That doesn't always mean they
actually want to be with so many wives. So far, the sultan of
Maracanda has only one favorite -"
"Jawl!" I tried to interrupt her.
She took both Edric's and my hand. "Sultans and
princes are very busy, and they don't always get to be with all of
their wives."
It was true: My father was ruling over a strategically
important Maracanda, and it wasn't easy.
Edric nodded. "And that's why the sultan currently
has only one daughter he can give away ..."
I pulled my hand away. "What do mean with 'only'
one daughter!?" I knew what Edric meant, but I was tired, cranky
and in desperate need of a bath, while both him and Jawl showed no
signs of the long journey that laid behind us.
He quickly planted a kiss on my lips. "And who's
the most beautiful princess in and around Maracanda."
Another door opened, and my handmaidens entered the room
like an army of delicate, but very determined butterflies.
In the next moment, they surrounded Jawl and me, and we
were ushered out and into my private chambers. Before the door
closed, I saw Edric waving at me and a guard stepping up to him,
pointing to the guest quarters.
Early on the next morning, I awoke, and I couldn't
recall ever being so happy before: He is here. My bright heart is
near ...
Slowly a song began to take shape in my mind. I wanted
to sing it to him, but I didn't know all the words yet.
I jumped out of bed.
Jawl was still sleeping in her hammock. It was
impossible to wake up a sleeping jinni, unless he or she wanted to be
awake. I slid into my silk morning overcoat and, followed by several
excited handmaidens, I ran barefoot over to the guest quarters.
But Edric wasn't there.
I ran along all the hallways, and finally climbed up one
of the towers. I heard the handmaidens exhausted breaths. Looking
down into my part of the palace gardens, I saw him standing there
with his head tilted towards the sun. "Edric!" I shouted.
He immediately turned around and smiled up at me.
A few moments later, I stood next to him.
"I woke up too early," he said. "I went
exploring and found this garden. It's closed off from the other
gardens with a gate. I hope it's allowed for me to be here. It's my
favorite, I think."
I wrapped my arms around him. "Mine, too. And
you're allowed to be here, because it's my secret garden."
Suddenly, I remembered what Jawl said on the ship, and I was
wondering what she meant with that my father and I would need
protection.
For some reason, I felt that there was more danger
ahead, and that the pirate attack was just the beginning. A wave of
despair came over me: I wanted to hide here with him, here in this
secret garden.
When my father became sultan, he appointed Faheem as his
head alchemist, and ever since I could remember, they were on good
terms. Why would Faheem suddenly begin to stray away from the
righteous path? Just because the Emperor of Constantinople had asked
him to manufacture a special kind of garment?
Edric expressed my next thought: "We have to find
out what Faheem is up to."
I clung to him. "Faheem came to my father's court
shortly before I was born, and my father was always pleased with his
work. I can't imagine that Faheem would do something my father
doesn't know about, let alone that he would try to kill him."
Edric kissed me. "Hopefully I'm wrong. I just want
to follow him around for a little bit. You can show me the city. And
the bazaar."
Yes! The souks of Maracanda ... even when I was a little
girl they were more interesting to me than life at the palace, and I
would sneak out with Jawl whenever I could. Jawl and I would run
along the tree-lined main streets, and then down narrow, winding
stairs between the houses - to the seemingly endless bazaar.
I would always find other children to play with, and we
would roam through the shops and cause all kinds of trouble.
Many of the children which I had met over the years were
only there for a short time and then continued their journeys with
their parents: Maracanda was a trading place, and most people came
here to make a fortune and then settle somewhere else.
Therefore, Jawl had always been the only friend who
remained, and when I was sad about our other friends leaving, my
mother would tell me that it wasn't my duty to make friends; it was
my duty to become a good wife to a prince someday.
My mother again reminded me of this duty, just when
Edric and I had returned from my garden: She wanted to show me the
first row of wedding dresses she had picked out for me to try on.
Ignoring Edric as much as she could, she maneuvered us
back into my chambers, called in the servants with our breakfast and
ordered my handmaidens to put me into the first wedding dress.
She didn't mind that Edric saw me in my undergarments,
and it soon became clear to me that she was curious to find out which
wedding dress he liked best.
My mother was always known for using a situation to her
advantage. She knew that my father had promised Edric to spend the
summer with me. She knew that Edric was the first young man I had
fallen in love with - and she expected that I wouldn't be a virgin
anymore by the end of the summer.
Leaning back on a heap of silk pillows, Edric thoroughly
enjoyed his breakfast, grinning from one ear to the other, while I
was bound and laced into the most outrageous creations of dresses I
had ever seen.
My mother observed Edric's reactions, and in the end she
was quite disappointed when she saw that he was more interested in my
undergarments than in any of the wedding dresses.
She was so busy with watching my handmaidens packing the
dresses into their wooden boxes that she didn't notice that he was
slowly approaching me.
He stood in front of me, with his breath smelling of
sweet jasmine tea. "You will get married." He softly tugged
at the drawstring of the satin vest that was covering my upper body.
"You will be the most beautiful bride Maracanda will ever see."
His lips brushed against my neck. "But I will have you first."
My mother whirled around and slapped his shoulder with
her feathery fan. "Savage boy!" She waved to the servants
and handmaidens, and then she vanished with all the boxes full of all
the terrible dresses.
Smiling, Edric tried to kiss me again.
I didn't feel like smiling, and I took a step back. "I
love you, but that doesn't mean you possess me!"
He slumped his shoulders. "Of course not." He
lowered his eyes. "I didn't want to embarrass you in front of
your mother."
I quickly embraced him. "I'm not embarrassed. I'm
very flattered. My mother wanted to use you to help me pick out a
dress, and we should have thought about how this would make you
feel."
He rested his head on my shoulder. "This isn't the
right moment, is it?"
I embraced him more strongly. "We'll know when it's
the right moment."
He sighed. "It feels as if I can't breathe,
Soraya."
My lips were close to his. "Yes. We'll learn to
breathe again, Edric. Together."
He smiled. "I think you should show me the bazaar
of Maracanda today. It'll keep us distracted from -"
The door flew open, and Jawl rolled in, surrounded by
rings of fire. She stopped, yawned and stretched her limps while
climbing out of the fiery sphere. "Did I miss something?"
Less than an hour later, we squeezed ourselves through
the narrow alleyways between the crates, cases and tables with which
the merchants displayed their goods.
Canopies in red, blue and green had been erected to
shield fruits but also colorful precious fabrics from the sun.
Here, Edric looked like a fair-skinned prince himself,
wandering through a world filled with things, smells and noises he
had never experienced before: Merchants loudly praising the silk of
their fabrics and the potency of their spices.
Other merchants demonstrated the functions of steaming,
sputtering machines or intricate tools chiming in the soft breeze
that rustled through the crowns of the trees towering over the souks.
Edric bought one of the tools and attached to the inside
of this leather belt.
He smiled at a group of men having their morning tea in
a small room with rugs stretched over mosaic tiles. The smoke of
their water pipes drifted into the alleyway, surrounding us in the
cool morning air.
We went on to a shop selling perfume oils, and Edric
bought me a small vial filled with the oil of Thracian roses.
The vial came with a beautifully carved and painted
wooden pendant hanging on a strong chain made of twine and wooden
pearls.
I wanted to use a drop of the oil, but Edric held his
hand over it and said that it was for the right moment.
Eventually, we bought dried and candied fruits to snack
on, and we ended up at a square with a big old tree that had a wooden
bench built around its mighty trunk.
This was where we met Nadira.
She was the daughter of a merchant from Isfahan, about
ten years old, and she sat on the tree bench. She had played with her
dolls, when she seemed to detect a peculiar smell. "Jinn,"
she whispered.
Jawl quickly sneaked up to her and put her finger over
her lips. "Shh." She moved her hands, and the dolls became
alive, quarreling in high-pitched voices and bumping into each other.
She moved her hands again and the dolls fell over.
I offered Nadira some of my candied fruits, and I knew I
had found another temporary friend.
Only this time, this new friend came with her own set of
temporary friends: A twelve year old boy named Ding from China and
fifteen year old Baako from Africa.
As soon as they heard that Edric would be a Varangian
soon, the two boys challenged Edric to a mock fight.
So, Nadira, Jawl and I sat comfortably on the bench,
enjoying various candied fruits, while the boys made complete fools
out of themselves.
Even though Edric was already a very experienced
fighter, he pretended to be just as clueless as Ding and Baako, but
for some odd reason the two younger boys could neither catch nor hit
him.
Edric and the boys threw the most outrageous insults at
each other, and sometimes I wondered whether these words actually
meant something or whether they were just being invented on the fly.
In the presence of Baako and Deng, Edric changed back to
being a boy for a while, and he seemed very happy about this
distraction from all the confusing feelings he had been facing
lately.
I was glad about this distraction as well ... I loved
Edric, but the incident in my chambers had made be realize how
determined he was. He was like an unknown force of nature, and I was
a little afraid of what he would do when we decided that the right
moment had arrived. I was grateful that, at least for a while, we
could still be children.
At noon, we were asked to leave, because several
merchants wanted to take a nap on the bench. Together with Nadira,
Ding and Baako, we continued to roam the bazaar - until we saw Faheem
walking along an alleyway.
We followed him through the winding streets and over
worn out stairs, up to a shop selling specialty fabrics. We hid in
the back of the store, between bales of cloth which were stacked
high, all the way up to the ceiling.
The stuffy air made our throats scratch, and we had a
hard time keeping ourselves from coughing and sneezing. Except for
Edric, of course, who seemed to have all of his bodily functions well
under control.
Faheem and the shop owner, who had introduced himself as
Ahmed, examined several samples of cloth.
Ahmed also had a box full of small bottles containing
strange liquids, and he dropped some of them on the pieces of cloth.
Stinging smells emanated from some of the pieces, making it even
harder for us to breathe.
Deng started to retch.
Faheem looked up and around. "I heard a noise."
Avoiding more of the fumes wafting up from the cloth
samples, Ahmed coughed. "Rats. I put traps up yesterday."
Edric grabbed my arm. "Rats?" he hissed. "The
bringers of pestilence? In here?"
Baako held up one of the traps with a dead rat stuck
inside. "Not anymore."
Edric slapped the trap out of Baako's hand. "Don't
touch that!" He pulled the shoulder of his tunic in front of his
nose and mouth.
I thought it was hilarious to see Edric being so
completely afraid of something.
Faheem made several steps towards the back of the store.
"That doesn't sound like rats."
Gasping for air, Ding tore his mouth open, and Edric
alarmingly stared at him, mispronouncing the boy's name: "Deng
... No!"
Faheem grimly scanned the space in the back of the store
with his eyes wide open.
Ahmed used another liquid, inadvertently setting one of
the pieces of cloth on fire. He angrily shouted several curses, too
colorful to be repeated by me.
Faheem quickly turned around to help the shop owner with
extinguishing the flames.
Apparently, there was more flammable material in the
store, and the two men slightly went into a panic, bumbling around
and shouting at each other which things could be used for choking the
fire and which couldn't (or would even make it burn more).
Ding was about to sneeze. "For the hundredth time:
It's not Deng, it's Ding!"
Without hesitation, Edric held his hand over Ding's
nose, and the boy sneezed into it.
The expression on Edric's face was almost indescribable:
Repulsion, disgust and followed by quiet regret. He thoroughly wiped
his hand on Deng's tunic. He lifted his hand, with his index finger
raised up, indicating that he wanted to give us a command.
Unfortunately, the rest of us couldn't hold back any
longer, and in the next moment, Edric was being sprayed with all of
our nasal contents.
Luckily, he had quickly closed his eyes. When he opened
them again, his lips twitched uncontrollably, his eyelids blinked
rapidly, and I thought he was about to have a nervous breakdown.
Then, he took a deep breath. "Alright," he whispered
sharply. "I'm going to sit over there now." He pointed to
another heap of fabric bales.
But before he could leave us, the smoke of the fire had
reached the back of the shop - and we all fell unconscious.
Thursday, December 27, 2012
VARANGIAN: THE STONE OF BABYLON - Review by Edi's Book Lighthouse
Hello all :)
Recently, I've asked the wonderful proofreader whose services I'm using now to also suggest improvements to the first book in my VARANGIAN Trilogy. I'm currently working on the new, improved edition of "Varangian: The Stone of Babylon".
Soon I will post most chapters of this book here!
Edi's Book Lighthouse kindly permitted me to re-post their review of my debut novel:
The Inevitable
Recently, I've asked the wonderful proofreader whose services I'm using now to also suggest improvements to the first book in my VARANGIAN Trilogy. I'm currently working on the new, improved edition of "Varangian: The Stone of Babylon".
Soon I will post most chapters of this book here!
Edi's Book Lighthouse kindly permitted me to re-post their review of my debut novel:
Introduction
On August 20th 2011 I posted about my discovery of with a visit of Varangian: The Stone of Babylon by Sabine Atkins. It did not take long and I came into contact with Sabine Atkins. Regularly readers know that can't get enough books. I explained Sabine Atkins my interest in Varangian: The Stone of Babylon and she sent me an electronic copy. It seems the number of books which I read in electronic format is increasing.
I read the book within three days which is most of the an omen that I like a book. I do not want to bore you any longer with a waterfall of words. Just follow me to my review of Varangian: The Stone of Babylon.
I read the book within three days which is most of the an omen that I like a book. I do not want to bore you any longer with a waterfall of words. Just follow me to my review of Varangian: The Stone of Babylon.
Book Store Information
In general my decision to read a book is mostly based on the cover and the blurb/synopsis delivered on the back cover. You do not get more information when you are in a book store. The world of books is changing which means I also will take in account blurbs and descriptions on GOODREADS and other places.
In general my decision to read a book is mostly based on the cover and the blurb/synopsis delivered on the back cover. You do not get more information when you are in a book store. The world of books is changing which means I also will take in account blurbs and descriptions on GOODREADS and other places.
Here we go:
Varangian: The Stone of Babylon (eBook , September 2011)
"Bound by an ancient oath, Edric is protecting a powerful secret ...
Anglo-Saxon Edric is a Varangian, the member of an elite military force in medieval Constantinople. Being part secret service agent, part imperial security detail, he is privy to all kinds of secrets and intrigues in a strategically significant city embroiled in wars as well as internal political turmoil. But Edric is taken by surprise, when he finds out that his friend, an alchemist from Persia, has given him superpowers and wants him to protect the Stone of Babylon - by any means necessary.
This task sends Edric on a mind-bending journey of epic proportions, full of exciting clashes with warriors and supernatural beings, dangerous alchemy, time travel, fantastical machines, and the acquaintances of strikingly beautiful members of the opposite sex (and not all of them seem to be concerned with his well-being).
A journey that not only will reveal to him the purpose of the Stone of Babylon, but also show him his true strength." [Source]
My Expectations
I must say that after reading the text above and spending time on Varangian: The Stone of Babylon my expectation rose above a certain limit. The blend of history, fantasy, superpowers and time travel is seductive. But I know it is dangerous if you expect too much.
I must say that after reading the text above and spending time on Varangian: The Stone of Babylon my expectation rose above a certain limit. The blend of history, fantasy, superpowers and time travel is seductive. But I know it is dangerous if you expect too much.
Theme
Deep in the heart Varangian: The Stone of Babylon is a book about sincerity, straightforwardness, principles, fidelity and love. All these themes find their expression in the person of Edric.
That sounds like Varangian: The Stone of Babylon is novel with a heavily philosophical and didactic touch. But I can assure you that most of the mentioned themes find their expression in the action and thoughts of Edric and his interaction with his surrounding. You won't find theorems. On the surface the reader is confronted with the question what one should do with supernatural gifts.
Sabine Atkins shows her talent to cope with thoughtful themes in an entertaining and intoxicating way which undeniably arouse your thirst for historical knowledge.
Setting
The prologue gives a first hint that there are more things between heaven and Earth as mankind can explain. The setting is heavily connected with a part of human history which does not belong to the general knowledge.
I have a knack for history and I must admit I never heard about the Varangian Guard before.
But it is more satisfying read when you know that the Varangian Guard was an elite unit of viking mercenaries and part of the Byzantine Army from 900 to 1400.
I highly recommend to read "English Refugees in the Byzantine Armed Forces: The Varangian Guard and Anglo-Saxon Ethnic Consciousness By Nicholas C.J. Pappas" in case you want to get more out of the book than pure entertainment.
I have a knack for history and I must admit I never heard about the Varangian Guard before.
But it is more satisfying read when you know that the Varangian Guard was an elite unit of viking mercenaries and part of the Byzantine Army from 900 to 1400.
I highly recommend to read "English Refugees in the Byzantine Armed Forces: The Varangian Guard and Anglo-Saxon Ethnic Consciousness By Nicholas C.J. Pappas" in case you want to get more out of the book than pure entertainment.
The Byzantine Empire and especially the town Constantinople plays an important role. Within a few pages Sabine Atkins takes you back in time. You see the big walls, you hear Arabian voices and you smell the for us European exotic scents. You breathe history and you think that is the way the book will go. But with a pinprick in form of an outburst of Edric's supernatural power she gives you a first hint that this is much more than pure historical fiction. The arrival of crusaders on board of Venetian warships set a wheel in motion which gives way to a story that will take you above the abyss of time and leaves you in waiting mode for the next book. You may miss information about time travel. That is a conscious decision. Any word more about it would give away a lot of the story. I confirm there is time travel and it is important for the story.
Plot
One could say that the title of the book - Varangian: The Stone of Babylon - is the most condensed summary of the book. But a stone does not live. All the things inside, around and connected to the stone comes alive in the connection between Edric and the stone. The story starts with a classical prologue which is short and mysterious. Then follows a breathtaking adventure which is best described with a roller coaster ride. The end of Varangian: The Stone of Babylon is a cliffhanger conclusion. That means Edric finished a part of his adventure but there is much more to come.
Character(s)
Edric, the intelligent, powerful, honest, sometimes naive, shy and stubborn man is a very dominating character who gives the people surrounding him (it does not matter to which party they belong) enough room to breathe and to develop their personalities. The intensity of characterization of other persons depends on their importance for Edric and the story. There are some characters where I would like to get more information. But I try to keep in mind that this is the first book in a series.
Edric is far beyond to be a macho. He likes women but loves only a few. He is afraid to be emotionally hurt. When he loves then his love is unconditionally. Edric belongs to the kind of people who wear their heart on their sleeves.
Edric is far beyond to be a macho. He likes women but loves only a few. He is afraid to be emotionally hurt. When he loves then his love is unconditionally. Edric belongs to the kind of people who wear their heart on their sleeves.
Style
The writing inhabits a certain ease and fits always to the situation. I like the pace and the rhythm a lot which ships you around any possible bumpiness without problems.
Don't be surprised when you breathe heavier when action takes part. Don't forget to wear sunglasses in case nobody should see your tears while reading the heartbreaking scenes. And once a while glows humor.
Don't be surprised when you breathe heavier when action takes part. Don't forget to wear sunglasses in case nobody should see your tears while reading the heartbreaking scenes. And once a while glows humor.
The Inevitable
Varangian: The Stone of Babylon is an absolutely great blend of history, fantasy, superpowers and time travel which blossoms in an adventurous roller coaster ride of a story starring Edric who is fascinating character because he is intelligent, powerful, honest, sometimes naive, shy and stubborn. He belongs to the kind of characters who are always true to themselves and which you sometimes want to kiss and to slap into the face at the same time.
Thursday, December 20, 2012
Edi's Book Lighthouse Review of 2nd book - Varangian: The Assassins of Teneo Mundus
A big THANK YOU to Edi's Book Lighthouse (Fantasy, Science Fiction & More) for their awesome review of the second book in my VARANGIAN Trilogy!
My Expectations
I read the 248 pages of Varangian: The Stone of Babylon in three days and liked it a lot. Of course I expected that Varangian: The Assassins of Teneo Mundus will continue on that level without dropping into the well known second book in a series malaise.
The Delivery
First thing I noticed was the increased number of pages! The 376 pages of Varangian: The Assassins of Teneo Mundus are divided into a prologue and ten named and consecutively numbered chapters. Unbelievable but true, I read the book in three days!
I do not want to repeat the book description which is at the same time a summary of the story.
Let us have a look at the two parallel running story lines. On Earth the Anglo-Saxon Edric has to cope with a world which looks quite different compared to the Byzantine Empire he comes from. Fortunately he is not alone. His quest is to find the parts for the key to open a "door" to the supernatural realm of Teneo Mundus, a world where the enemy prepares for the final fight. In order to hinder respectively kill Edric, the assassins of Teneo Mundus are sent to earth.
That means the earth story line is head most a travel, hunt and fight story. There is a lot of tough action and it is good to see that Edric even with his supernatural berserkrgang need the help from other.
Edric is still the character as known from Varangian: The Stone of Babylon. But author Sabine Atkins offers more insight to Edric's inner life - the impact of his dreams, the emotional roller coaster when it comes to relationship with women, emerging doubts and more. It is also good to see that people like Caren, Renata and Kevin are much more than prompters without soul and brain. The relationship between these characters has a direct impact on the story.
The fights versus the assassins are impressive and it is not always predictable if all characters will survive or not. Fortunately author Sabine Atkins did not forget that a slight smile from time to time is welcomed.
The most impressive development compared to Varangian: The Stone of Babylon is the indroduction of the realm of Teneo Mundus with the character of the medieval knight Count Baldwin. I admit that Count Baldwin is my favorite character in Varangian: The Assassins of Teneo Mundus. Baldwin, Edric's human antagonist, thrown into a distant world which has not much in common with the world he knows. Sabine Atkins takes time to introduce Baldwin and his intellectual world to the reader. It is one of the highlights to see the development of Baldwin. A knight with principles and a plain view of the enemy in form of Edric turns into a man who takes a stand again the inhabitants of Teneo Mundus and the evil Henry Delion. At first unintended he supports Edric while protecting other survivors of the Byzantine Empire. A medieval knight with a heart and soul buried deep, deep, deep in the fathom of his intellect.
With Count Baldwin the story got an impressive counterweight to Edric.
I can't wait to see when they will meet the first time on Teneo Mundus.
I can assure you that Varangian: The Assassins of Teneo Mundus did not drop into the well known second book in a series malaise.
Honestly I have nothing to criticize.
Varangian: The Assassins of Teneo Mundus delivered more entertaining pages than expected.
Varangian: The Assassins of Teneo Mundus introduced a new main character with a fascinating development.
Varangian: The Assassins of Teneo Mundus continues the story on a high level.
Varangian: The Assassins of Teneo Mundus prepared everything for the final book in the trilogy.
Varangian: The Assassins of Teneo Mundus is an excellent fantasy story full of action and emotion, inner thoughts, two worlds and great character development.
Monday, December 10, 2012
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Recently, the book got its first 5 Star Rating on GoodReads saying that "This is the more than worthy second book in the Varangian series."
Tomorrow is your last opportunity in 2012 to download this book for free.
To help you pass the time, sample an entire chapter of "Varangian: The Assassins of Teneo Mundus" here:
Chapter 6: An unsettled hell
Baldwin awoke with the sensation of a thousand tiny
tongues licking him.
First, he thought he was having one last feverish dream,
but when he slowly opened his eyes, he saw (and smelled) a monstrous
beast sliding by him.
Its thick body was covered with small mouths filled with
revolving rows of pointy teeth. The mouths spread putrid slime all
over him, obviously marking (and preparing) him for consumption at a
later point in time.
Somehow he managed to lie perfectly still until the
beast had slithered out of the cave and into a row of bushes growing
between boulders on the foot of the mountains.
He saw light smoke wafting from tiny bubbles forming on
his breastplate, which lay next to him.
"Oh, dear God!" He jumped up and quickly
undressed himself.
He even took off his cross and the compass. He quickly
glanced over to the others: everyone was still sleeping. He grabbed
his breastplate and ran down to a small waterfall nearby and
collected water in a large leaf. Then he started to scrub the piece
of armor with a mixture of fine gravel and grass.
Arannamea woke up. "I shall help you."
He wasted not a single thought on hiding his nakedness.
"No. Please go back to sleep."
She scoffed and got up. "How can I? You are sitting
there, cleaning your armor!" She kneeled down next to him. "What
has happened?"
She reached into the bag on her belt and pulled out
another one of her tins. She opened it and tore a leaf from a bush
heavy with drops from a thunderstorm that had come through the area
during the night. She scooped a large amount of its scented contents
onto the leaf.
Baldwin wiped sweat from his forehead. "A beast,
with mouths where skin should be, spat on my armor."
Arannamea began to clean the pieces of the armor that
Baldwin had already scrubbed off. "This will help prevent
further damage."
Baldwin noticed that Nora, Tymon, Egor and the younger
children were waking up.
He saw that the legs of his underpants were being
dissolved by the slime. His undershirt was already completely gone.
Ligia and Nora quickly unsheathed the small knives on
their belts, grabbed his underpants and cut their legs off.
Nora scraped out a little bit of the substance from the
scented tin, transferred it onto the shorter underpants and gave them
to Baldwin. "They need a good cleaning anyway." She
drizzled more of the scented substance into his hand. "And Your
Grace needs it as well."
The boys snickered as they took away his armor,
gesturing to him that they would continue removing the slime from it.
Baldwin stepped underneath the waterfall.
He wondered why it had been just him who the beast
singled out for consumption, but he was glad that it was. He assumed
it was because he was the tallest in the group.
The waterfall was too cold for him to remain underneath
it too long.
He quickly scrubbed himself down and washed his
underpants. He saw Arannamea approaching with a blanket over her arm
and holding something in her hand.
"Give your undergarment to me. It needs to dry."
She looked straight at him, extending her arm and opening her hand.
She carried his cross in her palm.
He saw that she wore the compass around her neck again.
"Mea ..." He was the one who was naked, but, as he took his
cross and the blanket, he glanced at her as if she was the one who
was exposed and vulnerable.
Aware of her weakness, she covered the compass with her
fingers. "I need to have it, Baldwin. I need to feel close to
him." She turned around and started to walk back to the others.
He wrapped the blanket around himself. "I will not
beg you, Mea! When he arrives, you will see that he is different from
the man you once knew!"
He took a deep breath to remind himself that he was the
emperor. He was also different from the man who left Flanders, but
being of noble birth, he was used to it. He was used to putting the
interests of his subjects before his own - and he was used to
happiness passing him by like the short, warm summer breezes on the
North Sea, where he had lived a long time ago. He regained his regal
poise, and when he returned to the camp everyone knew that from now
on, he was no longer just a man with a sword, and a suitor with a
wish for love: he was their emperor and their protector.
*
Furiously, Delion rushed into the lab.
A large group of Aspeliths still worked on the warehouse
size room, while the scientists who Delion had brought with him from
earth examined plants, soil, insects and small animals they had
found.
"Did you make another one yet?" Delion's
booming voice echoed in the half-empty room.
A starry-eyed scientist turned to Delion.
It was obvious that he and his colleagues were more
interested in finding out more about Teneo Mundus than in creating
another assassin. "We don't have time for your personal
vendetta, Henry!"
An Aspelith stepped up to Delion.
He searched for the right words in English. "He
killed one of us. We not ... enemy of you. We enemy of him."
Half annoyed, half interested, Delion furrowed his
eyebrows. "How is this possible?"
Another scientist managed to briefly divert his
attention away from a frog-like creature to address the question.
"Henry, we told you that we're still having trouble calibrating
the dimensions and behavior of our Stone of Babylon device. Other
stuff came through with the assassin."
The Aspelith stared at the scientist. "We not ...
stuff!"
The scientist took a candy bar out of his lab coat
pocket. "No, you are not. I apologize." He gave the candy
bar to the Aspelith, who chewed it up immediately and spat out its
wrapper.
Delion looked at the second scientist. "Why does he
know that Edric killed one of them?"
The Aspelith scratched his neck. "He sends back."
The second scientist nodded. "Edric's got the
original Stone of Babylon, right?"
Delion rolled his eyes. "Yes, of course. But why
doesn't the bastard just beam himself over here with the ancient
thing?"
The second scientist picked up his tablet, showing an
image of a copy of Naheed's manuscripts. "The first gate has
something Edric needs before he can arrive here, but Naheed didn't
mention it anywhere."
Delion turned around and walked back out of the lab.
"Which brings us back to task number one: make another assassin!
Now!"
The scientists looked at each other, completely unnerved
and exhausted.
*
After several days of hiking, Baldwin and the group
under his protection arrived at the other end of the forest.
They approached the beginning of a long bridge, but the
other end was shrouded in thick fog.
Tymon stepped up to a big sign with crudely drawn images
on it. "This was made by the creatures we killed in the forest
..."
Baldwin was beside him. "It seems to be a warning
not to cross this bridge." He glanced at Tymon. "If
creatures like them would not cross, what does this fog conceal?"
He looked around, and he saw only a high and steep mountainous wall
ending near the forest.
"If we do not cross," Tymon pondered, "we
can only turn back or go where the creatures came from."
Arannamea appeared next to them. "This is the path
to the tower. We must cross." She had already started walking up
the small set of withered stairs leading up to the bridge.
Baldwin took a deep breath and moved aside to let the
others step onto the bridge between him and Arannamea. He could sense
the smell of fire and brimstone, and he whispered a short prayer.
After that, he couldn't remember what happened.
Later, as he awoke on a large bed covered with a beige
fabric that felt like soft silk, he only remembered entering the fog.
He wore a different kind of armor now (it looked like
large, black scales masterfully arranged and attached to each other),
and several tubes came in and out of his body; one was even stuck in
his nose. He coughed. There was a sharp pain in his chest. He looked
beside him, and he saw Arannamea sleeping next to him.
She was completely naked, but similar tubes also came in
and out of her body. The compass shimmered between her breasts.
A short arousal hit him like a slap in the face: he
quickly looked away, and searched for something to cover her up. He
saw Egor, Tymon, Nora and the children lying on other beds
distributed throughout the room. Egor and Tymon wore the same scales
armor; Nora was naked as well, but the younger girls and boys were
wrapped into something that resembled the cocoons of butterflies. He
saw tubes sticking inside all of their bodies.
Suddenly, he felt Arannamea's hand touching his.
"They think we are two families who belong
together," she whispered. She turned on her back, grimacing in
pain. "They are very different from us." She tugged on the
tubes protruding from her chest. "They have given us these so
that we can stay alive down here."
"God almighty!" Baldwin groaned. Hesitatingly,
he glanced at her. "Aren't you feeling cold?" Her beauty
and her obvious lack of bashfulness took his breath away, and he had
to force himself to think pragmatically.
She shook her head. "No. Do not get upset when you
see them."
He held his hand over his eyes. "I already am
upset, for I am seeing you."
She squeezed his hand. "You must let go of certain
conventions, Baldwin." She glanced across the room to Egor and
Tymon, who had both woken up as well. Now they were gently waking up
Nora.
This was not a good moment for Baldwin to find out that
the three of them were in a relationship already. "Please tell
me that Nora is at least married to one of them!"
Arannamea looked at him seriously. "Except for
Chara and Stefan, we all didn't know each other when we came here.
Nora is married to neither Egor nor to Tymon, but we had to think
about how we could go on in this strange place."
Baldwin licked his dry lips. "I understand."
He looked around again. "Where is my armor and my sword?"
She pointed to a corner. All their belongings were
stored in a trunk made out of a large crystal. "They are
friendly, but they seem to be in a war with another country or a very
powerful person that must have been attacking them severely for
hundreds of years. Unfortunately, unless this war ends, we cannot
continue our journey."
Baldwin sat up. "Why do you know all this?"
She chuckled. "I tend to hold my breath when I am
walking through smoke. I wasn't unconscious like you and the others."
He carefully put his feet on the ground. "Alright.
Then let us see whether we can help our hosts to settle their dispute
with their attacker."
He stood up. The scales armor was tied too closely to
certain parts of his body, and two of the scales pinched his crotch.
He grimaced. "Confound it." He shook his limbs
to loosen up the armor.
The high double-doors of the room opened, and hundreds
of insect-like creatures fluttered into the room and attached
themselves to Arannamea and Nora. Each time the women moved, the
small beings got excited and adjusted their positions with swift bats
of their iridescent wings.
Another creature appeared at the doors: it was naked,
but its skin was strategically stretched and folded with wires and
hooks, concealing its gender. It snapped its long fingers and pointed
at the compass around Arannamea's neck.
Amidst several seconds of the irritating fluttering of
insect wings, Arannamea changed a setting on the compass and gave it
to Baldwin.
The creature at the doors burped sulfuric smoke. "He
awaits you."
Instinctively, Baldwin clutched the cross dangling from
the chain around his neck.
*
For what seemed like hours to Baldwin, he and the
creature wandered through an underworld that came uncomfortably close
to his imagination of true hell: rivers of red-hot, molten rock
flowed through organically shaped habitats filled with creatures of
all shapes, sizes and colors.
At first, Baldwin thought he was witnessing public
executions and tortures.
The creatures seemed to openly operate on their exposed
bodies, and to nail flaps of their skins to metal lattices. He was
used to seeing blood and mutilations, but this was too much evenfor
him. He gagged and closed his eyes.
"Today, we celebrate," burped the creature
walking in front of him.
Baldwin swallowed hard. "What ... is the occasion?"
I knew it! he thought. They will throw us into these pits
of boiling rock, and they will roast us on their pitchforks!
The creature stopped and gently stroked Baldwin's hair.
"Your arrival, of course." It looked deeply into his eyes.
"A long time ago madness befell one of our most honored
citizens."
Baldwin made a broad gesture. "And what I am seeing
here is normal?"
The creature laughed. "I wondered the same, when I
saw that you and the other two have not properly protected your women
and children. We are at war."
They reached a heavily guarded habitat and walked
through an arched doorway, then along a hallway with a row of crystal
windows. Another creature stood there on the other side. He wore a
long robe and his forehead was covered with several small horn-like
protrusions. Baldwin saw that it was a male person, because instead
of folded and stretched skin, his hips were enveloped in an
elaborately knotted loincloth.
The person seemed stressed out and impatient. "Finally!"
Suddenly, tremors similar to those from an earthquake
ripped through the whole habitat. Baldwin was thrown against one of
the crystal windows. It cracked from the impact of his scales.
"Are we being attacked again?" he asked.
The horned person was immediately beside him. "Not
today. This is the dilation. It always happens this time of
year. Are you the one who carries the anchors?"
Baldwin rolled his eyes. "No! I am not Edric!"
He angrily glanced at the horned man. "And why do you know about
the anchors?"
The person with the stretched skin put its head very
close to Baldwin's face. "If you are not Edric, why do you
know about the anchors?"
Baldwin felt smothered and pushed both of the people
away from him. "Please keep your distance!"
The horned man pulled Baldwin away from the window and
the other person. "A man in a cloud appeared one day, and he
said he could stop whatever it is that is breaking everything apart.
His name was Naheed. He said a man he called Edric would arrive and
place anchors in the four corners of our world. One of these corners
is right across the hills. And so we waited and waited -"
"And one of our most honored citizens went mad,
because of all the waiting!" the other creature interrupted.
The horned man waved his hand. "He was already mad
before that. But ... yes ... maybe all the waiting contributed to the
progress of his condition. You see, he wanted to be the sole
protector of the area where the anchor needs to be placed."
Baldwin moved a few steps away from the horned man.
"This is not my problem. My ... our ... families need safe
passage to -"
"Yes, I know!" The horned man walked towards a
set of doors and opened them with one touch of his hand. He gestured
to Baldwin to enter. "Welcome to our council!"
Baldwin wanted to take a deep breath, but his lungs
froze.
He swallowed and breathed through the bunch of thin
tubes running into his mouth and down his throat. He straightened his
shoulders and entered a magnificent hall with crystal columns and
walls constantly transforming themselves through streams of bubbling
liquid rock cooling off and reappearing again through new cracks.
The members of the council all looked similar to the
horned man, only each one of their robes was of a different color.
The beings all sat at a large, glittering black table that formed a
half circle.
"Before all of you get excited," began the
horned man who had first talked to Baldwin."This is not him."
A long unified sigh filled the room.
Baldwin held up Arannamea's compass. "But he is on
his way!" He smiled reassuringly, although he still wasn't
looking forward to seeing Edric again.
Instantaneously, the big sigh changed into a delighted
murmur.
Baldwin again felt jealous of Edric, but this time not
because of Arannamea, but because of the happiness and hope the mere
mentioning of his impending arrival precipitated. A housecarl
being regarded as more important than an emperor, this irked him
tremendously. Actually, if it had been any other Varangian, it would
not have been so bad. But this particular one, who had confronted him
with this special brand of patronizing mercy, instead of swinging his
battle-axe at him and just getting it over with. Instead, he let him
live to witness the glory this impertinent housecarl would
bestow upon Teneo Mundus, and the love he would give to Arannamea.
Baldwin felt the hairs on his neck stand up in fear and
fascination: Edric was several steps ahead of everyone else. It
didn't matter to Baldwin whether Edric was born with this talent, or
whether Naheed's alchemy had something to do with it. He saw Edric
for who he really was, someone who was more than a human, and he knew
that in order to later show the Varangian his place, he himself would
have to become more than an emperor.
After the council had determined that they wanted to
look at the compass every other day to see how close Edric was, they
sent Baldwin back to the others.
He returned late, and Arannamea, Nora, Tymon and Egor
were already sleeping. Exhausted, he lay down next to Arannamea and
fell asleep immediately.
Baldwin was awoken many hours later by soft laughter,
whispering voices and the fluttering of many tiny wings.
He opened his eyes, and he saw Nora making love with
Tymon and Egor. He sat up immediately, but remained at the edge of
his and Arannamea's bed.
He looked beside him, but she wasn't there. "Mea,
why is Nora not with child yet?" He walked over to the lovers
and closed the curtain around their bed. "It seems to me that
neither Tymon nor Egor are missing any opportunity to -"
"There are certain herbs and spices, Baldwin."
Arannamea stood by the only oval, crystal-framed window that offered
a panoramic view of a mountainous area covered in black soot and
burnt rock. She turned around to him a little bit too fast, and the
winged insects needed a moment to re-arrange themselves. "But I
doubt that we can delay it much longer."
Baldwin stared at a shimmering, nearly transparent wing
which was coming to rest at the center of one of Arannamea's breasts.
He felt the ground shake slightly, and he was happy that
it was a real earthquake - and not his desire for her playing a trick
on him.
He slowly approached her.
"This place is falling apart," Arannamea said,
looking straight into Baldwin's eyes.
In the next moment, his hands gently stroked back her
hair, and his lips were pressed on hers.
One long, desperate kiss was all he wanted, and he was
delighted and shocked at the same time when she clutched her fingers
around the edges of the scales on his back to pull him closer.
She made this one kiss even stronger and more desperate
than he had intended it to be.
For a fraction of a second, he wondered how he could
remove the scales tied to his hips, but he quickly discarded this
thought.
"I would be a fool to cling to the thought that
Edric hasn't been with someone else during all those hundreds of
years," she whispered. "He might still love me, but he
might also think that I am dead."
Baldwin took a step back.
He noticed that their embrace had killed a few of the
insects: wings twirled lifelessly down to the ground, and his
protective scales had spots of colorful dust on them. "I do not
want to be merely someone else. I want to be the one who carries your
heart for all eternity."
Without a pope telling him what to do, and without being
sure whether God's voice would even be able to reach him in this
world so far away, he had to rely on his own senses telling him what
the right thing to do was.
She closed her fingers around his hand. "I truly
feel blessed to be loved by two wonderful men. The odds seem to be in
your favor, but I can only be sure when I see Edric again."
Baldwin gently moved away from her.
He turned towards the window, glowering at the scorched
bleakness outside. "Well, we cannot cross the area beyond the
hills. Madness struck a man who built a fortress there, and he
commanded his descendants to continue to attack this realm here.
Naheed has told the rulers of this realm that Edric would come and
keep this world from falling apart. Unfortunately, Naheed did not
take into account that his champion could be delayed, and some people
are apparently better at waiting than others."
Arannamea let go of his hand. "We need to wait
here? Until Edric comes by?" She vehemently shook her head. "We
cannot wait. Edric needs the compass."
Baldwin furrowed his eyebrows. "The Stone of
Babylon will guide him, will it not?"
She became more and more distraught. "According to
Naheed, the compass is part of the Stone of Babylon. It shows him
where to install the anchors."
Baldwin scoffed. "I see." He started to think
about a way to safely cross the other kingdom, but the result of one
of their attacks was right in front of his eyes in the shape of a
burned stretch of land reaching all the way up to the horizon.
And then he remembered the voice of the beautiful woman
he saw right after he had killed the beast in New Constantinople. Are
you Edric?
"Whoever sits in the fortress beyond the hills does
not know who I am ..." He glanced at Arannamea. "I could
pretend to be Edric."
She had trouble following him. "To do what? They
will notice that you do not possess the anchors."
He stiffened his lips. "I can kill the ones in the
fortress. After all these years, I doubt there are many of them left.
It might be just one person, but he or she is the only one who stands
in the way of making peace. The council here is already secretly
negotiating with a few inhabitants of the fortress."
Reluctantly, he concluded that in order to properly impersonate
Edric, he would have to learn as much about him as possible: "Mea,
I need you to tell me everything you can remember about him."
She uttered a short, bitter laugh. "You look
emaciated. Edric always looked like he was enjoying life. And food."
Baldwin ran over to a table with several bowls filled
with simple baked goods sprinkled in sugary crystals.
He grabbed a large piece and tore a big bite out of it.
"I can enjoy life!" he mumbled.
He grimaced: the high sugar content of the food made his
teeth hurt. An insect that resembled a butterfly landed on his cheek
and began to clean off the sugar crystals around his mouth. Unnerved,
he waved with his free hand, swishing the animal away.
Walking toward him with measured steps, Arannamea
smiled.
She took the food away from him. "Do not try to
look like Edric. Learn how to be a Varangian."
*
Several days later, Baldwin was dropped off at a wooded
hill with a large flag on top of it that marked the beginning of the
fortress perimeter.
He had been brought here inside a wagon equipped with
life-support machines; he wasn't wearing his protective suit anymore.
Instead, he wore tight black pants, brown boots and an intricately
embroidered leather vest. His naked, muscular arms showed Anglo-Saxon
tattoos (the council had assured him that they would fade and go away
over time).
After Baldwin stepped out of the wagon, and took a deep
breath.
Clear air was streaming down from beyond the hill.
He felt exhilarated and tense at the same time, and when
a battle-axe was tied to his back, he felt weighed down as well.
The first steps up the hill were the worst: he thought
he would fall over backwards any minute and roll back down.
He reached the flag, and his gaze wandered across the
landscape beyond the hill.
It was picturesque, but its shape was also oddly
familiar. The rolling hills had small craters on them, overgrown with
moss.
Suddenly, the landscape expanded, and very far away it
lifted itself up in a high plume of fire and smoke.
And then he knew what it was: a gigantic version of the
beast he had killed right after waking up in Teneo Mundus.
For a moment, he regretted his decision to impersonate
Edric, and thought about turning around, but then he just continued,
hiking down the hill.
The path ended at one of the craters.
He expected a bunch of snake heads speeding towards him
(surreptitiously, his hand moved near the hilt of his battle-axe),
but it was long ropes whipping out and wrapping themselves around his
ankles and wrists.
"Who are you?" a deep voice asked.
Baldwin straightened his shoulders. "I am Edric!"
"Who are you?" the voice repeated in a more
menacing tone.
He licked his lips, trying to remember the formal
version of Edric's name. "I am ... Aethelric!"
Without warning, the ropes pulled him into the crater.
To his surprise, he found himself surrounded by armored
females. They all had long hair that was held together by rings made
out of snake scales. The women were humanoid, very small and robust,
but he noticed right away that they were seasoned in combat. Their
armor was covered in mud and soot.
Baldwin assumed it was from living inside the land-size
dragon. He knew it wasn't a dragon like the ones from the legends he
heard about as a boy; the smaller one he had killed didn't spit fire.
He was sure the people occupying the creature generated the scorching
fire.
He also sensed that they were acting under great duress.
He had to follow the women and then several equally
armored, equally small and robust men, mostly crawling through the
stinking innards of the beast, until they reached another crater. One
of the men stepped forward, and he gestured to Baldwin to kneel so
that he could whisper something in his ear.
"Kill him, Edric," the man breathed into
Baldwin's ear.
Without moving a muscle in his face, Baldwin gazed at
the man for a moment, then climbed back out of the crater.
He stood on what seemed to be another hill (but he knew
better now), and saw that the enormous end of the beast's tail was
wrapped around a magnificent white fortress with magnificent towers
whose roofs shimmered in the sun.
The gate of the main entrance to the fortress flew open,
and a beautiful family of four, tall and slender and exquisitely
dressed, walked out.
The husband ran towards Baldwin, and when he reached
him, he threw himself to his feet. "Finally, you have arrived.
We have been waiting for you for so long."
The husband was obviously the descendant of the citizen
who had gone mad.
He kissed Baldwin's hands before shaking them vehemently
in dog-like obedience. "My name is Beziret."
Baldwin secretly smirked: Of course! The mad citizen
told his descendants to name their sons after Edric's son Berhtred!
He further assumed that, over time, the name had gotten
corrupted - just like the information Naheed had given to the citizen
of the burned lands beyond the monster-hills.
With much concern, he stared ahead of him, at the rest
of the family.
Beziret smiled at Baldwin. "I thought you were
younger ..."
"It took me longer to arrive than I expected,"
Baldwin said weakly, but the other man seemed satisfied.
The wax-like features of the two children and the wife
didn't change, and their bodies were slightly twisted as if they were
being held upright by something other than their own strength.
Everything in his mind told him to leave this dangerous
place as quickly as possible, but he had a task to fulfill. He wanted
to do the swift one-handed untying of the battle-axe Arannamea had
shown him. However, unlike Edric, he hadn't practiced this move since
his early childhood, and killing Beziret right then and there wasn't
an option.
Beziret dragged Baldwin down the hill, and as they
passed by the wife and children, Baldwin saw that three creatures
like the ones he had killed in the forest were wearing the skins of
Beziret's dead family like whole-body suits. Their feet were bigger,
so their bloodied heels stuck out of the torn skins. The creatures
were all chained to one of the walls of the entryway, and they,
almost inaudibly, moaned in pain.
The terrible sights and sounds brought Baldwin close to
fainting, and he had to remind himself to take measured breaths.
He followed Beziret into the Great Hall of the fortress.
The entire room was equipped with all kinds of automatic
weapons and traps; some looked very old and rusty, while others
seemed to have been installed just a few days ago.
Bodies in various stages of decay clung to several of
the deadly machines.
He couldn't help but notice the morbid aesthetics with
which the weapons had connected themselves with the corpses: a heart
that had been crushed and thrust out of a rib cage sat like a wilted
flower on the chest of a woman who had just recently perished. There
was a scroll in her hand, and Baldwin assumed that she had been one
of the court members negotiating with the other realm.
It didn't matter much.
By now, Baldwin was already sure that he wouldn't leave
this place alive - but he was also sure that he would take Beziret
with him.
They continued to a more private area deep within the
fortress, and this room was even more shocking: it was decorated with
centuries-old depictions of what Beziret and his predecessors thought
Edric would look like. Battle-axes in all shapes and sizes hung from
the walls or leaned in corners as if they were religious
paraphernalia.
Beziret flung his arms around Baldwin. "Are you
proud of us?"
Baldwin just wanted to wring the other man's neck, but
he was held back by the prospect of one of the machines killing him
before he could finish his task. "Yes. I am very proud."
Beziret took a step back, opened a secret door and
pointed down a staircase. "We shouldn't waste any more time. I
will show you where you have to place the first anchor."
The space Beziret led him into was extremely small, and
there was a hole in the ground, painted with a golden rim.
Baldwin leaned against a wall to check whether any of
the machines were hidden in it.
He couldn't feel anything, so he didn't hesitate: with
full force, he bashed Beziret's head against the opposite wall. He
heard the other man's nose crack, and he saw bright blood gushing
down the other man's luxurious overcoat.
Beziret started to squeal loudly.
This sound, which Baldwin was only used hearing from
animals about to be slaughtered, startled him considerably.
He saw Beziret scrambling back up the narrow staircase,
and focusing back on the task, he quickly untied his battle-axe. He
chopped at Beziret's leg, and one of the blades sliced into the other
man's calf, splitting the leg open up to the knee.
Screaming even louder, Beziret made it to a lever near
his bed and pulled it. He crawled onto the bed.
Baldwin saw that the room transformed into one of the
deadly machines, and he expected the bed was the only safe place. He
jumped onto the bed as the other man pulled a battle-axe from
underneath the mattress.
However, it wasn't a real weapon, just a relic, and its
blade shattered on Baldwin's chest.
Baldwin had enough trouble, just keeping his balance on
the soft bed, and he thrust one of the blades of his axe into
Beziret's shoulder.
The other man was stunned for a moment, and Baldwin
quickly kicked the lever back with his foot.
The room stopped transforming.
Beziret slid off of the bed and crawled, with Baldwin's
axe stuck in his shoulder, into the hallway connecting his bedroom
with the Great Hall.
Baldwin stumbled after him and pulled the weapon out.
Sweat ran into his eyes, and he couldn't see well for a
moment.
It became clear to him that killing a man in battle and
assassinating one were two completely different things.
Beziret mustered all that remained of his strength, got
up and limped into the Great Hall.
Baldwin was right behind him.
He heard the machines being activated, and he hurled
himself in front of the other man.
Flat cages with spikes on the inside fell from the
ceiling, and Beziret tumbled to the ground. He fell in such a way
that his hip landed directly onto one of the blades of the
battle-axe, before the cage trapped him.
Baldwin heard the other man wail, but he had to protect
his neck and chest from the spikes rushing towards him.
He let go of the axe, and threw his right arm over his
chest and his left arm over his neck.
The spikes pinned his arms down; it was painful, but not
as much as he had expected: the spikes were rusty and crumbled quite
a bit.
Beziret glanced at Baldwin. "Why are you doing this
to me, Edric? I have been your faithful servant!" he sobbed.
Baldwin didn't answer.
He saw the creatures wearing the skins of Beziret's dead
wife and children.
They were talking to several other creatures who looked
like them.
Apparently, they had set each other free in the
meantime. The first three creatures got out of the skins and hugged
each other in great relief.
Baldwin hoped that they would also help him make a quick
end to Beziret, but the whole group just sat down and watched.
Baldwin tore his right arm away from the spikes, which
mainly broke off; parts of them crumbled down to the floor, other
parts were still in his arm.
He stuck his hand through the bars of his cage into the
cage that held Beziret in place. He moved his hand underneath Beziret
and grabbed the hilt of the battle-axe as strongly as he could. He
knew that there was a specific place on the upper thigh that if cut
into a man would bleed out just as quickly as if he was cut in the
neck.
Baldwin removed the blade from the Beziret's lower
abdomen and started to make small cuts into the other man's upper
thigh.
The other man fell slightly to his side, trying to see
what Baldwin was doing. "Edric!"
"Tell me, good man," Baldwin hissed angrily.
"When did your ancestors decide to move from waiting for someone
to worshiping him? Was it right after Naheed told them?"
Beziret moaned in pain. "No. It was when my
ancestor found out that you had to be more than human. The other
citizens always maintained that you are merely a man, but my ancestor
knew that for all your great achievements to be true, you must be a
god -" He got interrupted by the blade slicing deeper into his
thigh.
Baldwin stuck his fingers into Beziret's wound, and
after searching for a while he found the artery he needed to sever.
As he tried to cut it with the battle-axe, the artery
slipped away from him.
His arm was getting tired, but he didn't dare to use his
other arm. He decided to rest a bit. He saw other, human-like figures
carefully enter the room, along with several of the armored people
from inside the gigantic beast.
Together with the taller, nightmarish-looking creatures,
they started to disassemble the deadly machines, and they brought in
tables, candles, dinnerware and all kinds of other nice things for a
festive banquet.
It became clear to Baldwin that the members of Beziret's
court wanted to celebrate his imminent death, but for whatever reason
they didn't want to take an active part in it.
Beziret drifted in and out of consciousness. "Edric
... you are a god, are you not?" he muttered deliriously.
"You shall not worship false gods," Baldwin
recited.
"Who are the true gods then?" the dying man
asked.
Baldwin burrowed his hand again into Beziret's wound.
"There is only one true God." He glanced around. "But
I believe He has discarded this world here."
He got a hold of the artery again, and this time he
decided to simply rip it apart. He began to yank on it.
Beziret moaned more loudly again. "Edric ... Kill
me, if you must, but promise me that you will place the anchor -"
"I do not possess the anchors!" Baldwin
growled. "And I am not Edric." He ripped the artery out of
Beziret's wound.
Almost instantaneously, both men were engulfed in blood.
The other man slowly blinked at Baldwin. "Who are
you?"
Everyone else in the room stopped with what they were
doing, and they listened closely.
Exhausted, Baldwin pulled his hand away from the
hemorrhaging wound. "I am Baldwin, emperor of Constantinople."
Beziret died, and the newly freed people celebrated
exuberantly.
They offered Baldwin to become their king, but he
quickly refused.
Stepping outside the fortress, Baldwin saw that the
gigantic beast was about to perish as its involuntary inhabitants
were cutting it apart from the inside out.
Soon, its body parts blended itself into the landscape
as a row of softly rolling hills. And he knew that he and the group
under his protection would be safe to continue their journey.
*
Arannamea and the others had waited in another wagon
equipped with life-support machines, near a small forested area.
After they had all walked for a while, Baldwin changed
back into his underpants and armor, and the blood-drenched vest,
pants and boots were burned.
As they continued their way to the Old Tower, Tymon and
Egor asked Baldwin what had taken so long, but Arannamea sensed that
he was deeply disturbed by whatever had happened. She gestured to
them to not insist on finding out what the knight had seen.
Their hike through the monster-hills was therefore
unusually quiet.
Even Chara walked next to Baldwin, often holding his
hand, without saying a word.
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